tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49940741208413907.post3939687497976145172..comments2012-02-12T18:46:25.387-08:00Comments on Design Ware: PointNikki Warehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04629179327889476789noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49940741208413907.post-49158537648556453952010-09-17T13:22:31.003-07:002010-09-17T13:22:31.003-07:00I enjoyed the introduction. It began on architectu...I enjoyed the introduction. It began on architecture being the unavoidable art, I would have liked seeing that elaborated on with tying it in with the rest of the summary. I feel like there was a constriction on the design aspects talked about.weston willardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17170488193200257564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49940741208413907.post-41448219843811161602010-09-17T08:35:14.043-07:002010-09-17T08:35:14.043-07:00I too, thought that your introduction was very pla...I too, thought that your introduction was very playful and a great way to help lead people into your piece. What was lacking unfortunately, were images to help solidify some of the things you were saying, other design aspects as well as some references to some readings. With these additions, I feel the assignment would have been executed more successfully...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49940741208413907.post-7377106615841765012010-09-16T20:40:49.560-07:002010-09-16T20:40:49.560-07:00Very light hearted and playful approach in your in...Very light hearted and playful approach in your introduction, which lowered me in and made me interested in what else you had to say. Unfortunately, I feel like you spent a lengthy amount of time on the subject of materials and failed to consider the other design aspects, such as the principles, amplifiers and design elements. You have met the word limit requirements but i feel that you could have replace some text with content other then materials. You have missed out on points by leaving out a photograph and referring to that photo. Overall I enjoyed your piece and can see that you are keeping up with some of the concepts that are taught but sadly have not met all the requirements of the assignment.Blakeni Delynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14311316693764638382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49940741208413907.post-91836550227744828672010-09-16T20:28:31.002-07:002010-09-16T20:28:31.002-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Blakeni Delynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14311316693764638382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-49940741208413907.post-82919739809059774692010-09-16T19:29:21.114-07:002010-09-16T19:29:21.114-07:00My contentions would be that I feel like some of t...My contentions would be that I feel like some of the examples or topics you brought up in supporting your text did not reflect the regions or spaces we discussed in class. I would also encourage you to tie in specific readings and examples that were brought up in those readings or in class. I'm not sure if your next post is the image that correlates with this assignment but I'd encourage you to explain that selection further.allisonwilson:https://www.blogger.com/profile/00255659190881204146noreply@blogger.com